The Song of the Reed

The Cut That Sings

Listen to the reed how it tells a tale, complaining of separations—Saying, “Ever since I was parted from the reed-bed, my lament hath caused man and woman to moan.I want a bosom torn by severance, that I may unfold (to such a one) the pain of love-desire.Every one who is left far from his source wishes back the time when he was united with it.In every company I uttered my wailful notes, I consorted with the unhappy and with them that rejoice.Every one became my friend from his own opinion; none sought out my secrets from within me.My secret is not far from my plaint, but ear and eye lack the light (whereby it should be apprehended).Body is not veiled from soul, nor soul from body, yet none is permitted to see the soul.”This noise of the reed is fire, it is not wind: whoso hath not this fire, may he be naught!’Tis the fire of Love that is in the reed, ’tis the fervour of Love that is in the wine.The reed is the comrade of every one who has been parted from a friend: its strains pierced our hearts.Who ever saw a poison and antidote like the reed? Who ever saw a sympathiser and a longing lover like the reed?The reed tells of the Way full of blood and recounts stories of the passion of Majnún.Only to the senseless is this sense confided: the tongue hath no customer save the ear.In our woe the days (of life) have become untimely: our days travel hand in hand with burning griefs.If our days are gone, let them go!—’tis no matter. Do Thou remain, for none is holy as Thou art!Whoever is not a fish becomes sated with His water; whoever is without daily bread finds the day long.None that is raw understands the state of the ripe: therefore my words must be brief. Farewell!

Masnavi I.1–18 · tr. R. A. Nicholson, 1926

The line English readers know as Nicholson's is not the line Nicholson ended up wanting: in 1930, with the Konya manuscript of 1278 before him, he directed that the Masnavi's first verse be read "Listen to this reed how it complains, telling a tale of separations" — the complaint first and the tale second, the reverse of what he printed in 1926.


The eighteen lines opening Rumi's Masnavi: a reed cut from the bed, its cry read as the soul's for God.

Rumi (1207–1273) composed the Masnavi at the request of his disciple Ḥusām al-Dīn Chalabī, whom he names in the Arabic preface that calls the poem the expounder of the Qur'ān. Aflākī's hagiography, written between 1318 and 1353, reports that the opening eighteen lines already existed on paper, drawn from the top of Rumi's turban when the request was made. A reed sounds only after it has been cut from the bed, its inner nodes driven out and its finger-holes opened, which ney-makers do by burning them through — so the complaint and the music are one event and not two. The English here is Nicholson's of 1926; he revised its first line in 1930 against the Konya manuscript of 1278.

Light

Separation is made the condition of the song rather than a bar to it: the reed cannot sound until it is cut, so the ache a reader brings to the poem is not evidence of failure but the instrument working.

Shadow

Line fourteen gives this sense no confidant but the senseless; line eighteen, that no raw man understands the ripe. Whether that names the self-emptied lover the poem speaks to, or a text declining to argue, is what an outsider cannot settle from the lines.

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Primary source

  • Jalāl al-Dīn Rūmī; ed. and trans. Reynold A. Nicholson, The Mathnawí of Jalálu'ddín Rúmí, Volume II: Containing the Translation of the First & Second Books, 1926, E. J. W. Gibb Memorial, New Series IV.2 (Cambridge University Press for the Gibb Memorial Trustees; Luzac & Co.); Proem, Mathnawī I.1-18 at p. 5 — I.1-4 quoted here; translator's Introduction, pp. xv-xviiThe English quoted in verse_text, verbatim as first printed, including the opening line 'Listen to the reed how it tells a tale, complaining of separations—'. In the same volume's Introduction Nicholson states that the translation 'does not attempt to convey the inner as distinguished from the outer meaning: that is to say, it gives the literal sense of the words translated without explaining either their metaphorical or their mystical sense'; that among the Oriental commentaries he 'profited most' by the Turkish of Ismāʿīl Anqaravī; and that 'the corrections which I look forward to publishing at a later stage, when the Commentary on this volume appears, are likely to be fewer, but also more important' than the textual corrections already issued.
  • Jalāl al-Dīn Rūmī; trans. Reynold A. Nicholson, The Mathnawí of Jalálu'ddín Rúmí, Volume II, 1926, Book I, Arabic prose preface, pp. 3-4, standing immediately before I.1Rumi's own preface calls the Masnavi 'the expounder of the Qur'an', applies to it Qur'anic phrases used of the Qur'an itself ('None shall touch it except the purified'; 'Falsehood doth not approach it either from before or behind'), and names the man at whose request it was composed: 'the Sword (Ḥusām) of the Truth and Religion, Ḥasan son of Muḥammad son of al-Ḥasan, generally known as Ibn Akhī Turk' and 'a native of Urmiya.'
  • Reynold A. Nicholson, The Mathnawí of Jalálu'ddín Rúmí, Volume IV: Containing the Translation of the Third & Fourth Books, 1930, Gibb Memorial New Series IV.4; Introduction dated Cambridge, April 1930; 'Corrections in the translation of the First and Second Books', pp. xiii-xiv; Appendix, Book INicholson's statement that he considers 'the Qoniya MS. (G), dated 677 a.h., to be the most authoritative text of the Mathnawí'; the Appendix 'showing the changes required in order to bring the translation of Books I, II and III (vv. 1-2835) into agreement with the text of the Qoniya MS., designated as G, which was transcribed in A.H. 677-A.D. 1278'; and within it, after five corrections to the Arabic preface, at Book I line 1, 'Read Listen to this reed how it complains, telling a tale of separations', at line 2, 'Read man and woman have moaned in (unison with) my lament', and in the separate corrections list at v. 8, 'Add quotation marks after to see the soul.'

The tradition itself

  • The Nay-nama, the eighteen opening lines of Rūmī's MasnaviThe esoteric reading given on this entry
  • Shams al-Dīn Aḥmad Aflākī, Manāqib al-ʿĀrifīn, 1353, composed between 1318 and 1353; the account attributed to Sirāj al-Dīn, Masnavi-reciter at Rumi's tomb. Persian ed. Tahsin Yazıcı, Ankara 1959-61; English trans. John O'Kane, The Feats of the Knowers of God (Brill, 2002). Read here in Ibrahim Gamard's English of the passage at dar-al-masnavi.org, not in the Persian or in O'Kane.The traditional account of the poem's beginning: that Ḥusām al-Dīn Chalabī asked Rumi for a book in the manner of Sanāʾī's Ilāhī-Nāma and the metre of ʿAṭṭār's Manṭiq al-Ṭayr, and that Rumi 'from the top of his blessed turban' put into his hand a paper on which, in the hagiographer's words, 'were the eighteen verses of the beginning of the Masnavi' — so the tradition holds that the passage predates the poem it opens.

Further reading

  • Franklin D. Lewis, Rumi: Past and Present, East and West, 2008, revised edition, OneworldBiography, chronology, the textual history of the Masnavi and its Western reception — including which circulating English 'Rumi' corresponds to a line of the Persian and which does not.

Linked entries

  • Transmitted intoReynold A. NicholsonAttested

    The English on this page is his — printed in 1926 from late manuscripts, and corrected by him in 1930 once the Konya copy reached him. The English versions made from his English rather than from the Persian, Barks's among them, inherit the uncorrected line.

  • Venerated inThe Tomb at KonyaTraditional

    Aflākī already attributes the account of the poem's origin to a Masnavi-reciter attached to the tomb, so recitation there is as old as the hagiography itself.

  • Set againstThe Elephant in the DarkAttested

    The same poem makes its case twice over: here by an image the poet states outright, and in Book III by a story he inherited and leaves the reader to work out.

  • Part ofThe MasnaviAttested

    The first eighteen lines of Book I — the prologue that opens the whole Masnavi.

  • Attributed toRūmīAttested

    The prologue of Rūmī's Masnavi, dictated at Konya.

  • Set againstFīhi Mā FīhiAttested

    The Masnavi's opening was composed and dictated; these are notes of speech. Dhabīḥ Allāh Ṣafā, quoted by Lewis, observes that the Discourses show the stylistics of oral delivery and lack the word-play, Arabic vocabulary and sound patterning a deliberately literary text of the period would carry.

  • Set againstOut Beyond Ideas of Wrongdoing and RightdoingA modern connection

    The lines Persian readers quote first are the Masnavi's opening eighteen, which Aflākī's hagiography says already existed on paper, drawn from Rumi's turban at the moment the book was asked for; the lines English readers quote first are these four, written by Coleman Barks. The two canons barely overlap.

  • Gave rise toSultan WaladAttested

    His Rabāb-nāma, composed between April and August 1301, opens in deliberate imitation of the Masnavī's first lines — the bowed rabāb sounds the opening cry in place of the reed.

  • Set againstThe Chickpea to the CookAttested

    The reed opens the Mathnawī crying at having been cut from the reed bed; two books later the chickpea is told, at length and by the one doing the cutting, what the cutting is for.

  • Set againstThe Dīvān-e Shams-e TabrīzīAttested

    The reed song opens the Masnavī, the teaching poem Rumi dictated to Ḥusām al-Dīn Chalabī in his last years; the Dīvān is the other half of his verse — lyric, sung, and largely earlier.

  • Set againstThe Dream of the Treasure in CairoA modern connection

    The reed mourns the distance from its bed; this tale needs that distance, because the news of home could only be heard abroad.

  • Set againstThe Tomb at KonyaTraditional

    The Masnavi opens with the reed cut from the reed bed and crying of separation; the night of his death is called Şeb-i Arûs, the wedding — ʿurs being, as Schimmel notes, the ordinary Sufi word for any saint's death anniversary.

  • Received fromSamāʿTraditional

    Samāʿ is the setting in which such verse is heard, and the Mevlevi ceremony is built around the ney — the cut reed whose complaint the poem describes.

  • Set againstThe King and the HandmaidenAttested

    The reed opens the poem with "the pain of love-desire" (I.3); this tale follows at I.35, and at I.109 names that pain as a physician would: "there is no sickness like heart-sickness".

  • Set againstThe Merchant and the ParrotAttested

    The caged parrot longing for her kin in India is the reed's complaint in another body: "Every one who is left far from his source wishes back the time when he was united with it" (I.4).

  • Set againstThe Moaning PillarAttested

    Two pieces of wood lamenting separation: the reed "complaining of separations" (I.1) and the pillar "complaining of (its) separation from the Prophet" (I.2113).

  • Set againstThe Old HarperAttested

    ʿUmar answers the harper with the Masnavi's opening image, turned into a rebuke: "Whilst the reed is knotted, it is not a sharer of secrets" (I.2203).

  • Gave rise toThe MasnaviTraditional

    Tradition has the poem grow from its opening: when Ḥusām proposed the book, Rūmī is said to have produced a paper already bearing the eighteen lines of the reed.

  • Set againstWho Is at the Door?Attested

    The reed that opens Book I complains of separation from its bed; here, three thousand lines on, separation is the fire that cooks the raw lover until the door can open.

  • Set againstMoses and the ShepherdAttested

    The reed complains of being severed from its bed; here God rebukes his own prophet for severing — “Didst thou come (as a prophet) to unite, or didst thou come to sever?”

  • Set againstMuʿāwiya and IblīsAttested

    Iblīs is given the reed's complaint of a lost source — “How should (one's) first love go forth from (one's) heart?” (II.2619) — and Muʿāwiya grants the words while refusing the speaker: “These things are true, but your share in these things is wanting” (II.2652).

  • Set against‘Allah’ and ‘Here Am I’Attested

    The reed's cry is a complaint of separation from its source; here a cry that seems to go unheard is told it is union already — the man's “Allah” is God's “Here am I”.

  • Set againstThe Journey Through the KingdomsAttested

    The reed remembers its bed and wishes back the time of union; the man of Book IV remembers none of his former states and keeps only an inclination.

  • Set againstThe Ruby and the SunA modern connection

    The reed cries because it is two, cut from its bed; the ruby has stopped being two, and its “I” is the sun's.

  • Set againstThe Turkish Amir and the MinstrelA modern connection

    Two songs inside the Masnavi: the reed's is a complaint of separation, the minstrel's a confession of not-knowing, sung to a listener who wants plain facts.

  • Set againstEvery Moment the Voice of LoveA modern connection

    The reed that opens the Masnavi mourns being cut from its bed; here the exiled soul has already set out for home, and the caravan is on the road.